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Her Mother's Daughter Above All

The suffering etched Upon her stoic though visibly stricken face broke my heart,and then broke it anew till I had to look away,the load too great to help her carry Though she never knew I tried Best left to the hands of God

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Deb M

Date: 9/14/2022 9:44:00 AM

Beautifully written poem from the heart Vickey! Debx

Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/14/2022 11:07:00 AM

Thanks Deb.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/13/2022 8:28:00 AM

Heartfelt piece written here Vickey. Yes leaving it up to God sometimes is the better way. Thanks for sharing...

Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/13/2022 9:40:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by my young friend.

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 9/12/2022 6:28:00 PM

I agree Jeff.The inspiration was the grief on Princess Anns face as she followed her mother's coffin for six hours.In the face of that matronly woman barely concealed was the spirit of a little girl Sorely grieving the loss of her mother.It truly was too painful to look upon.When we lose the second parent we are as orphans in this world.Thanks for reading and your comment.I agree about prayer as well,our greatest overlooked resource kindly offered at no cost.I also believe she was above all her mother's daughter as she embraced the role she was assigned in life to the full.Perhaps more so than those who would wield the full aspect of royalty

Jeff Kyser

Date: 9/12/2022 6:17:00 PM

one of the greatest griefs is for a parent to watch a child going through hell and feeling helpless. prayer is not helplessness