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Her Minds Rewinding

Her mind rewinded back to a better place and time reminding her that, wait! There was no such minds rewinding in minding a better place and time in her minds rewinding times. And that made her feel sad, yet, it empowered her at the same time to mind her minds reminding of the sad in minding the times in rewind. Then, she thought of the here and now. Here? and Now? She thought of those here and now times that reminded her that minding her minds rewinds were not for the here and now times. Go figure, she thought to herself. Figure what? What about figuring thoughts out for herself in the here and now? Focusing forward before the here and now thoughts reminded her of the minds time to forward the time before rewinding reminded her to mind rewinding the time to a better place and time.

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Date: 8/10/2017 4:45:00 PM
Hi Holly , wonderful write , living in the moment , this is why it is called ' the present' :)))) lots of hugs from Ireland
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Holly Bohto
Date: 4/1/2018 4:48:00 AM
Thank you. I haven't been on poetry soup in awhile. I forgot about writing this piece. This reminds me of how my mind feels and how I put my mind all over my writing.

Book: Shattered Sighs