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Her Light

A part of her detested the sun And longed for the night While the other part Loathed the moon And craved the daylight Though both sides of her Were drastically different Each craved for a lamp In the sky Dark or bright

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Date: 8/5/2017 3:56:00 PM
This is an intricate poem, yet one which I can identify with. Beautifully written Sofia.
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Date: 8/5/2017 5:50:00 AM
I like how simple, yet revealing this is. Great poem.
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Date: 8/3/2017 3:07:00 PM
A simple but evocative poem of light. It really senses your psyche. My compliments, Sofia.
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Date: 10/21/2016 5:01:00 PM
Luckily for her she'll always have a light available; her dreams and cravings have a high chance of coming true. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/21/2016 9:28:00 PM
Beautiful way you put that Paul thank you friend
Date: 10/21/2016 2:52:00 PM
very interesting one...
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Date: 10/21/2016 2:26:00 PM
Nice one. :)
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Date: 10/21/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thank you heidi

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