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Her Last Winter

For Contest: Free Verse So cold her lips speechless to soon forgotten loves warmth Emptied heart frozen Pastel rainbows sightless Darkened clouds dripping overhead Acid rain remover of all tenderness wounds bleeding quickly frozen as candied apples shinning A soul lay dying with no renewal of seasons awaiting Thoughts to painful to keep simply vanish in the thaw her last winter...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/11/2011 8:29:00 AM
Sharon, I absolutely love your entry, the vivid imagery and your acid rain line, just did it for me.. Good luck for the contest ;-) love W
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Date: 2/11/2011 6:07:00 AM
Those pastel rainbows are the essence of this piece Shar.. much good luck in the contest my friend.. an amazing insight into emotions and luv... good luck my friend with luv..
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