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'her Last Time'

Fuelling a need that lay dormant her intro into the world of sex was rough and unsophisticated her first time fairy tale turned into a nightmare it was nothing compared to the books she's read that stranger scarred her made her look for sex instead of love blinded by a supposed search of her fairytale all the men she attracted somehow fell short after their first encounter without them being aware they were weighed and found wanting deep down, she could not understand that the contentment she chased were somehow getting lost in between the sheets every time she felt a little worse and yet she continued in that cycle because it’s the only thing she knew even though that was never part of her destiny
*inspired by a close friend’s suggestion. Not a personal write but someone out there might be fighting this demon* 14092012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2015 4:11:00 PM
Wilma, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:01:00 AM
This is a significant piece and worthy of the top place finish. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:02:00 PM
so sad when a girl's 1st time ends up this way Wilma a sensitive write congrats on 1st place hugs 7
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Date: 11/13/2012 6:48:00 PM
Wow, getting lost between the sheets is such a clever line. I guess the old is always new and what goes on won't end. Sad one to read.
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Date: 9/14/2012 11:58:00 PM
very well written and expressed on this subject matter Wilma ..struggling with demons of all kinds is a reality one cannot ignore luv .. thankxx for sharing this intricate piece .. hope u r doing well luv ..
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Date: 9/14/2012 7:46:00 PM
Good way to write from another point of view. how a person would feel in this situation. Very nicely done.
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:52:00 PM
This has a sad chill to it that brings home the predicament of so many. You bring out the fact it becomes a never ending cycle of despair. Well done and........I love your new avatar Wilms, you are a gorgeous young lady! Hugs to you, LIzzie
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:27:00 PM
Unfortunately she didnot meet me.Very good poem Wilma.
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Date: 9/14/2012 10:23:00 AM
sad but unfortunately true for many women. great write!
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Date: 9/14/2012 10:22:00 AM
Fantastic well written Wilma, unfortunately there are many who find themselves in such "traps". - I wish you a good weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2012 9:55:00 AM
I agree, Wilma, this is a poem that says it as it is, and rightly so, love how you have wrote this. wonderful poem...
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Date: 9/14/2012 8:39:00 AM
Wow, this is a deep and intriguing write my friend! It's a sad subject and one that same people fall into! This is a powerful poem, an astonishing write Wilma! Great Work!!
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