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Her Last Hurrah

Pinch me,I do believe I'm in love With the looker who's swaying up above With his stuff up in the breeze He does surely aim to please As I look for another dollar to shove My girlfriends are shouting and giggling away We celebrate her upcoming wedding day Lots of silliness abounds As we take turns buying rounds The dancers know what to do and say Embarrassment's not an option at all The bride-to-be feels ten feet tall They show her lots of attention When her wedding we mention The party carries on till last call So glad my birthday wasn't known Or my cover would've been blown And I'd the embarrassed one be As those Chippendales danced for me A few extra moves would be shown! for contest"Burlesque Botique" sponsored by Miranda Lambert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/16/2011 10:24:00 AM
A bunch of us girls took my mother to the Foxes Den on your 75th birthday. She ended up hiding under the table with a smile on her face. lol!!! Many congrats on your win, Deb. Lainie
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:37:00 PM
got it soo right, deb.. super CONGRATS!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:46:00 PM
Cute..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Deb in the contest "Burlesque Boutique" sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:35:00 AM
Many Congratulations Deb on your 2nd place win in this Burlesque Boutique contest.Nice write..Love, gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:12:00 PM
hahaha, Deb. So it was your birthday that day, Huh? I have never gone to one of these places. But I have seen many movies about it. Congrats on your great descriptive write of burlesque.
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:04:00 PM
LOL I went once...they came near me and I drove them off with a chair like a lion tamer...grrrrr..so crude. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congrats. on second place Deb. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:32:00 PM
Many a girl has those Chippendales come to their bachelorette parties!! Whoeee!! Congratulations on this winning poem!
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:03:00 PM
Many congratulations Deb on your win in Randa's fine contest.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:31:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your sweet success in the Burlesque contest with this fantastic write luv.. enjoy your top ten spot with luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:18:00 AM
Deb, thank for your support, this was absolutely a great way to write about burlesque, GREAT INTERPRETATION OF THE ART...THANKS, Randa
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Date: 3/21/2011 3:00:00 AM
Fun read and an excellent entry for the contest. Best wishes.
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