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               Woman Praying On Holy Bible In The Morning. Teenager Woman Hand ...

Within the long crevices of twilight As hazy images would slip and fade— Minutes drift like an opalescent rite Where silhouettes flash behind a lampshade, Wheeling faintly on my mind to invade Glimpses from young adulthood I recall Such b r o k e n n e s s this fist could never haul: Yes, Mama’s portraiture finds me needing Treasured vignettes now angled on our wall... Prayers I grant on this date---her wedding. ~ Dizain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart 5/18/2020

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Date: 5/22/2020 7:23:00 AM
Nette, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Date: 5/20/2020 12:33:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/20/2020 11:09:00 AM
Lovely tribute to mother's wedding day. Nette, Congrats for top placement. Mohan
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Date: 5/19/2020 11:34:00 PM
Coming back to congratulate you on your win Nette :)
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Date: 5/19/2020 4:02:00 PM
Congrats Nette on another winning poem, nice to have you back posting again!
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:19:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you on your First Place win with this wonderful poem Nette! xxoo
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Date: 5/19/2020 12:47:00 PM
Such beautiful, innovative language of images, Nette - "long crevices of twilight," "images would slip and fade" set in twilight. Congratulations on your top placement! Blessings to you!
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Date: 5/18/2020 2:53:00 PM
No greater memory then that of your mom, lovely sentiments Nette, be well, stay healthy xo
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Date: 5/18/2020 4:06:00 AM
A lovely moving Dizain Nette. I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/18/2020 12:11:00 AM
Beautiful and creative at the same time with a melodious flow. All the best Nette :)
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:07:00 PM
Just so beautiful, Nette. I love it so and wish you all the best for the contest. Love to you and God's blessings too... Gina
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