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Her Heart Is Unobtainable

Her heart is unobtainable She haunts me in my sleep My will is not sustainable There's nothing left to keep I've seen Her in my better dreams But, they're too far away At night, Her livid heart still screams: 'Why can't you let me stay?!' I feel Her still, aside my brain She's trying to get in I'll lose my mind if she'll remain So, don't let Love begin I crumble, deep inside this text My heart's a bitter crutch When all I know is quickly vexed I treat my dreams as such...

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Date: 1/20/2017 4:36:00 PM
I think many can relate to these lines Adam:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2016 7:47:00 AM
I feel that. Just like Tim said, this is a subject I too write on frequently (or at least some variation of it). Women, eh? Can't live with 'em... I'll stop there, I gotta go get mine up b/c I'm ready for her to make me breakfast
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Date: 7/24/2016 1:41:00 AM
Nice, dude.
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Date: 7/23/2016 9:25:00 PM
This is very nice Adam. LINDA
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Date: 7/23/2016 6:50:00 PM
Very good, Adam...
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:28:00 PM
Love your rhyme Adam. I have written many poems on the subject. I can feel your words.
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