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Her Dream

Her ship was her dream, Her escape in her mind. Her ship was the froth in her coffee.

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Date: 4/25/2020 10:34:00 PM
am i the soul pnuema who queriez.. doez your lower cases in the title of this poem have connotations, in particular; the froth being 'he' in "her dream"? p.s...i did lurk through yourn poems, i pray that you mind not.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/26/2020 6:43:00 PM
And yep, thats exactly what the froth is... :)
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/26/2020 7:04:00 AM
Hi James, lurk all you like :) i did put the title in lower case on purpose, her and Her are different people

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