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Her Dream

As crystallized ice melts away And fire breaks the morning She lies in bed dreaming What started out as breath taking Now turns for the worse And steams her mind Her breathing, shallow Her eyes, sunken Her face, fading And then, it closes in There’s nowhere to go There’s no escape It’s coming for her She screams for help No one answers, she’s alone Vines entangle her Thorns bite her flesh Fear grips her heart Through the tangle of forest plants She pushes harder Trying to escape She’s trapped by a wall In desperation she claws at the wall Breaking fingernails and flesh She tries climbing, too steep She wants to turn and disappear It’s too late, there’s no escape It’s behind her, it’s here Choking her every movement She stops resisting And… As the crystallized ice melted away And the fire broke the morning, She lay in bed dreaming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/3/2012 3:15:00 AM
i like this alot too some really decent imagery and nice ending.
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Date: 7/20/2009 3:23:00 PM
Bravo... power in the mind it is exciting to tell about it... enjoyed the poem
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Date: 6/20/2009 11:38:00 AM
Dreams are cogs in our brains ticking over in the sub concious, good ones - bad ones. Some we remember, some we don't. Kool write Candice>>James
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