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Her Distended Gifts

. Then she bragged front mine self "these lips have yet been kissed" So forth came I past those lips melting way her fears

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Wilma Neels

Date: 4/24/2012 2:26:00 AM

Who would not feel save when fears melt away.. Enjoyed your gem James, have not read you in a while.. Hope yourself and Noah are doing okay :) love Wilma

Gail Debole

Date: 4/21/2012 6:21:00 PM

Hi James - Very nicely written. Like the style of the poem. Thank you for your kind comments about my poem. - Gail

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2012 3:40:00 PM

Lovely written James! - oxox Anne-Lise

Daver Austin

Date: 4/18/2012 11:17:00 AM

Thanks for reading my stuff, Sir James. Each posting of your own work is a treat. Love, daver

Daver Austin

Date: 4/16/2012 9:12:00 AM

A masterpiece of speculation. Methinks thee art up to no good. Love, daver

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/16/2012 8:16:00 AM

JP....I like the "Victorian" imagery here! cool touch! jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2012 7:09:00 PM

I really like the last part of this, melting away her fears. Very nice!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/15/2012 12:21:00 PM

you pulled me in with this wondrous piece, james... love how you phrased your thoughts!... romance abounds!..:) huggs!