Her Chair

hush now my daughter let lamplights crown your damp hair waiting for beaded prayers to bathe teary sky empty Mom's chair rocks no more… heaven sails with her pearled lips Choka Me, Dr. Ram Mehta

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 1:11:00 AM

you leave me misty-eyed, franco... nostalically quilled.. cheers on your huge win.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:21:00 PM

wow, what imagery to describe this sad scene. Beautiful and congrats for your win.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/27/2014 6:14:00 PM

My first read of your work and its outstanding. Congrats. BG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2014 3:54:00 PM

very endearing, I can't wait to read more verse from you. Congrad's Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/27/2014 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this heart wrenching poem Franco.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/27/2014 10:05:00 AM

congratulations on your winning choka.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 7:15:00 AM

A sad write, perfectly executed, touching. Congratulations on your first place win with this excellent choka.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2014 6:27:00 AM

A touching piece! Congrats.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/27/2014 6:03:00 AM

Lovely, Franco. Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 4:33:00 AM

Sweet moments to memory Franco, wonderful choka!congrats on top win!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 2:24:00 AM

this has a real spiritual air to it many congrats on your fine win:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2014 1:52:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Franco

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/25/2014 4:34:00 PM

Well done. You have captured a moment so poetically. Good luck in the contest. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2014 12:37:00 PM

ohh my, this choka is brilliantly done, how sad, franco... nice to see you visiting my page.. huggs