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......Helter Skelter.......

"Tertium guid...." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Spending a few moments pondering The syllogism of existentialism, and All of the pages of histories Finds, movements, theories and themes.... The intricities; complexities Compounds; variables and factors Real or imagined? Proven, and reproven Or, reasonings and conclusions Breakthroughs!? How far we've come How far we've gone On and on, and on and on.... Scientifical; anthrolifical; astronomical Enlightenments, and advancements Psychological; philosophical Both, for me and you That is, if we do, share The same points of view? Oh how I love complete silence Stillness.... The meditation of contemplation Trying to take hold, of the transitory And to incise it, into forevers Monomorphic stone!?.... Standing amid, a quaglistic earthium Chisms of revisums; revisums, of the isms Circular conjugation, concoursing It's configurations.... Unbeknown, toward, a conflagration Beyond the eyes? This, schizogenic, schizogenesis Genesis, of another nature "Dementia Praecox"....With no eraser! Gabylon, now in every nation.... Welcome, to, "My View!!!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ......Helter Skelter....... Note: Smile ~ A repost as a contribution towards the Halloween spirit here at.. ..Poetry Soup!:) ~

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Date: 9/21/2010 8:40:00 AM
Aside of dictionary on lap, a thought provoking muse here, nicely put to poetry and showing us a wickedly contorted imagination perfectly matched and fit for Halloween. Thanks for your kindness of commenting today John, your views ever appreciated - good to see you active! Anna-Marie.
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Date: 9/21/2010 8:40:00 AM
Aside of dictionary on lap, a thought provoking muse here, nicely put to poetry and showing us a wickedly contorted imagination perfectly matched and fit for Halloween. Thanks for your kindness of commenting today John, your views ever appreciated - good to see you active! Anna-Marie.
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:12:00 AM
What does Gabylon mean? I could not find it in the dictionary.
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Date: 9/20/2010 6:47:00 AM
I like this poem...it is very funny when you really think about it... You are very talented John Rhinem, your loving fan, Doris Culverhouse {@_^_@} ------------------------------- ......U..... --------------------------
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:47:00 AM
see mom was right we learn something new each day and was glad to capture this read bet your hands had to hurt getting this all down my friend makes one opens eyes alittle more also thanks for all your kind reviews to my writes too my friend I am battleing the deamon within and not going to let him win as long as my heart can hold out sweet blessings my dear friend to you and family
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:48:00 PM
Though im not in your position,i can read your view and i can understand the feeling which goes deeper than the haloween fun John,i do understand this New Genesis. .Intense!Celene!
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:48:00 AM
Very creative, deep and interesting write, John. enjoyed it.
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Date: 9/7/2010 11:22:00 PM
Very deep, John. Complex thoughts and ideas penned in this one. You chose a great title. Is this truly "your view"? "Helter skelter" indeed. Not sure I got your message but there are some frightening thoughts here that add to the "Halloween spirit." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2010 8:05:00 PM
I absolutely love, love, love this piece. The meter was consistent, the rhymes were creative and well-placed and your use of vocabulary impressive! I particularly enjoyed the bits of humor. Intellectual poetry for the win! (I know, I'm a nerd... but I embrace it.)
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