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Helpless

Doctors make their routine rounds each day Well-meaning zealots come in the room to pray I sit here sharing tears with you I wish there was more that I could do To fight the cancer, they can do no more Your body has lost this hard-fought war There is no other course we can pursue I wish there was more that I could do You are far too young to leave this world How can I carry on without my girl I would do anything to help pull you through I wish there was more that I could do I watched you release your last breath No miracles were left to ward off death One last kiss before the final adieu I wish there was more that I could do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/9/2014 9:57:00 AM
Joe, Congratulations, on your win in Cyndi's "HELPLESS, KYRIELLE CONTEST." take care -LINDA-
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Date: 6/8/2014 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 6/7/2014 3:40:00 AM
Oh my Joe... This is SO compelling and heart wrenching. I pray that this is not a real life experience about losing your wife or daughter...To offer congratulations seems trite and insulting so all I can say is: THANKS - Tim------PS: I agree with the last part of Andrea's comment too
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Date: 6/5/2014 9:52:00 PM
A very good one about the fight against cancer and the toll it takes on the survivors as well. Congrats, Joe. you are a talent that I wish to see more of here.
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Date: 6/5/2014 9:03:00 AM
What a great write Joe ! Not to be missed ! Truly helpless still brave fight wid cancer goes ,, hope absolute cure wud come one day to delight of docs as well ! Congrats on win !
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Date: 6/5/2014 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Joe. Sorry for getting here late! Cancer is awful and I pray one day they will find a cure. It has stolen almost all my family. Even the thought of it threatening my daughter gives me night terrors.
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Date: 6/5/2014 2:22:00 AM
Perfect Kyrielle with apt take on the theme, congrats on a fine win, joe
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Date: 6/4/2014 3:10:00 PM
Not one comment? Unbelievable. May I be the first to say that this one brought moisture to the eye...Congrats.. BG
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