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Help Me Please

hollow me....completely hollow............ not having light on my path ....depressed root less falling apart....... tried so much to bear every weight .. but not able to stand and see the light for far...... i know its a small time as every day this night will also have have its end but afraid of my finising strenght ...... this night may finish with my death...... i m doomed broken peace of heart... not able stand make my self correct...... feeling like standing in mid...... and every aim of me just making me falling in....... my sky my land every inch of my glad..... teared and abraid not able to collect and make it again..... my words my friends my dairy and my parents..... feeling missing you, need you to hold me agianst.... this storm i m feeling cant able to stand............ wanted to live more .....but cant see the path any more...... i never ask for help to you all... but this time i cant swim at all.....

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Date: 2/19/2016 9:32:00 PM
a heartfelt poem. LINDA
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Manu Singh Tanwar
Date: 12/17/2016 11:09:00 AM
thanks ya
Date: 2/5/2016 7:43:00 AM
Let me lighten the load. Take my hand I offer peace and blessings my friend.
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Manu Singh Tanwar
Date: 2/5/2016 9:10:00 AM
thank you....

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