Help Me

Help me help me I'm under attack My poor old lady is stuck in the sack She screams and she moans She won't leave me alone She's there for two weeks cause she threw out her back

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2015 12:35:00 PM

incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/15/2015 11:44:00 PM

Good one Tim!!! LOL

Tim Smith
Date: 5/15/2015 11:54:00 PM

Thanks Arthur...lol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/14/2015 3:49:00 PM

She's gonna get you from your back~ she `ll put you right into her sack/when you yell and moan/ She leaves you alone/and goes to enjoy her big mac : )... Love your limerick :.)..

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2015 11:44:00 PM

LOL I liked that!!!!

Tim Smith
Date: 5/14/2015 3:53:00 PM

Ut oh...did you watch Danny Divitto's move "Eight Heads in a Duffle Bag"?.....say hi to Ronald McDonald : )

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2015 9:11:00 AM

After 2 weeks in the sack I think you would need help lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 5/14/2015 9:26:00 AM

Lol...sure would