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Help From Above

Starlight. Star bright
First star I see tonight
Science says you're not a star
They say your light is planet Mars

But can't I still just make a wish?
A simple plea. A small request
All I want is one true love
A gift of light from up above

Rockman  :-)

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  1. Date: 10/18/2013 12:17:00 AM
    Simply stated with sweet emotion.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 4:23:00 PM
    love it Rockman. - Venus, Mars, firefly jars, I wish on everything. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 1:54:00 AM
    you rocks man

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:53:00 AM
    How delightful! :) Go ahead and wish! Thanks ever so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem, My Jiggly Bits! I appreciated your visit to my work!

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Nice little poem. I can hear a child's voice in this piece. Lovely.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Aw....this is so sweet!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:01:00 PM
    ahhhh, it is short and sweet and the last part of it is so precious. That was a touching ending for me. And what a coincidence. I was working tonight on a contest poem called StarShine!!! But probably won't post it right away. Thanks for letting me know you finally got a new post up. Randy??