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What if we forget a few luxuries*** so we could afford to share and provide food to those hungry child ? Their tear make me feel sad ... It is a long journey Between Human Being and Being Human Let us travel at least one step daily To cover the distance And help the ones in need.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 8:33:00 PM

thank you for the reply

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2015 8:04:00 PM

ASHIQ, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ashiq Alam
Date: 4/16/2015 4:53:00 AM

Hello skat :) hugs :) , Thanks #skat for your nice complement.... i will try to be with all , just need support and inspiring from all of u my sweet friends :) , I am ashiq from bangladesh.like to read and write good inspiring lines...hope you will reply :)

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 3/30/2015 3:25:00 AM

Powerful thought. This is a strong statement. You have a message well worth writing. One suggestion--perhaps look for less common adjectives--this will make a stronger and more memorable statement. (for example: FAMISHED instead of hungry....DESOLATE instead of sad....) Thanks for sharing this with your readers. Victoria

Ashiq Alam
Date: 4/16/2015 4:55:00 AM

thanks a lot friend victoria ... i like to inspire people ... im glad having ur suggesion :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 10:47:00 AM

Ashiq, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Ashiq Alam
Date: 4/16/2015 5:38:00 AM

Thanks an ocean :) wish u a blessed year 2015 :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2015 9:04:00 AM

- A small greeting and warm welcome, Ashiq :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

Ashiq Alam
Date: 4/16/2015 5:34:00 AM

thanks :)

Deborah Turner

Date: 3/28/2015 8:30:00 PM

Thank you for this beautiful poem you most be a good person to write so lonely. #7

Ashiq Alam
Date: 4/16/2015 5:36:00 AM

thanks , you are also a good friend :)