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Below is the poem entitled HELP which was written by poet Nazie Kimbrity. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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They need our help
as they usually yelp

Why won't we just stop and think
Instead of sitting having a strong drink

They're in desperate need
We can't just leave them for them to bleed

Aren't we suppose to treat each other the same
That is our main aim

They are not invisible, just visible
So why are we so divisible

We've got to be; work as one
If we do, our co-operation would be as big as the sun

Most are dying, as well as crying
eyeing us with prying eyes

Others may starve to death
with nothing to say because they're out of breath

Why let them suffer
just to make yourself seem tougher

Why do we ignore each other
Would you rather go further
or would you take notice of your brothers


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  1. Date: 6/3/2011 8:49:00 AM
    This is inspiring :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 3:30:00 PM
    Nice creative and thought provoking write, Nazie

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:42:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nazie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 3:39:00 AM
    really nice poem u make a lot of good points luv*Skat

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 9:10:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..