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Do you see me? I'm STILL right here. Do you see me? You're so near, yet you feel so far away. Remember all those nights you begged me to stay? And I did.... But then you faded away. At one point I was everything you wanted. At one point you couldn't even think about saying goodbye. Confusion is all I feel. You left me here, with this broken heart to heal. Do you see me? Or are you too stuck on yourself. Do you see me? I'm screaming for help.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 12:15:00 PM

Rebecca Cagle, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)

Skat A

Date: 9/6/2015 1:11:00 PM

Rebecca, Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem today. Luv **SKAT**

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/28/2008 5:55:00 AM

I was about to comment on Stephanie's poem when I read your comment so I jumped back over here and read hers - Don't trip I just read another comment of hers that was rather rude - By the way that was "Fellers heart bleed" in my last comment - I often "Feel"confused myself or possibly according to her I'm just ignorant enough to think I do - God bless you Rebecca

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/26/2008 2:18:00 PM

Rebecca - Boy this poem sure does make a fellers bleed - I'm so sorry that you have to feel this confusion and pain - My families love and prayers are with you always hon - God Bless

George Anos

Date: 9/24/2008 8:34:00 PM

yes confusion is a state of mind. but so is love, we love with the hypothalamus. confusion can be said to be felt too, same way as love is interchangeble as a feeling, nay, accepted truly as a "feeling." So try to be nice, you're not someone so great to say these things. there's poet in all of us. In Desiderata it is said, "Always, there will greater or lesser person than yourself..." Try to live with that fact. Some may not be very good poets, but at least they are better human beings.

Deneen White

Date: 9/24/2008 7:27:00 PM

this is a good write, it sounds like you may be going through some things, I am not sure if this event is recent or not, hope things work out for you, take care D-nyce