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Hello, We Have Been Here

“Hello! we’ve been here – near – spying on you, Spying on what you do, stew, chew, and spew”. On a moon quarter bloomed, Halloween night, Two ghostly bumble bees swarmed in for a bite. One buzzed my ears and whizzed around my beard, Growling to drill my lips …. if my wife cheered. One hissed her ears, kissed her cheeks, and shrieked To lay the table with all we baked, and then sneaked Behind my wife – sniffing – if she’d hide any bites, And had a good bite, and switched off all our lights, Glaring not to disrupt their peaceful night, Yet to prepare the bed and leave the site.
*A 1st Place* in the following contest (Judged on Oct. 15, 2020) Oct. 12, 2020 Halloween Fright Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 10/16/2020 10:44:00 AM
- Back with congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Date: 10/16/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!!
Date: 10/15/2020 11:25:00 AM
Nicely rhymed couplet Newton. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/15/2020 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for your sweet comment!!
Date: 10/15/2020 10:17:00 AM
Thanks so much for offering us a bit of humor in this "buzzing" entry! Clever and fun to read, Newton. Congratulations on a first-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2020 11:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Carolyn, for your immensely great comment and the equally great placement!!
Date: 10/14/2020 8:10:00 AM
... I hope you had a good night ... without buzzing bumble bees ... I read this with a big smile ... good luck in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2020 10:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment and your kind wish!!
Date: 10/13/2020 9:10:00 PM
Oh, my that ghostly bee, Newton, good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/14/2020 3:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve, for this immensely great comment and your kind wish!!

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