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Hello Sunshine

in this dream to write beautiful is to one who shines brightest in the soul standing on the ground no more than earth having two suns a marriage of light with darkness a dark spirit creeps in shadows black dancing with the light blood food pumping love paints color each beat drum rolls happiness forever is with you my shadow bringing in the light when i look upon you darling as my sun in your warm desire floating emotions wings golden feelings sparkle around circle haloing my sun shining dearest angel for you darling queen of my heart i bow when i look into those eyes shine inner beauty a stunning soul that dazzles the most precious sanctuary with love

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Date: 12/30/2013 6:03:00 PM
Well expressed. I like the way you do your poetry. I guess you're my kind. Will be learning more from you. Good luck on them. And thanks for sharing. =) This one paints a sweet and gentle memory.
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Date: 12/30/2013 3:54:00 PM
So soft gentle and beautiful ..shining and dazzling..brightening and warming the heart.
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Date: 12/30/2013 2:12:00 AM
gentle is the word; so full od sweet musings as always, liam... i praise thee!.. huggs and happy new year!
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Date: 12/29/2013 11:41:00 PM
Liam.....your heart is tender and true......Out of it flows exquisite beauty. I love the use of light and darkness co-existing....beautiful....
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Date: 12/29/2013 7:35:00 PM
if those eyes shine inner beauty upon you they sure reflect back through you in to some beautiful poetry! Lovely write Liam :)
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