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Hello Mr Hare

A glance toward the window A hare, I stare, he stares A moment we share He ran A passing glimpse I hoover like the good wife does A shadow I do spy He's there, that hare, right there I try not to care He ran A passing glimpse Sweep away the endless leaves A rustle jolts my eyes You there, brown hare, we stare I try not to scare He ran A passing glimpse I sit and wait I barely breath The sight amazes me My hare, his hare, a pair Of I they were aware They ran More than a passing glimpse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2010 4:37:00 AM
sounds romantic the way you wrote this, i love the rhyming, nice one
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:51:00 AM
Really enjoyable, you painted a very nice picture there and i do so like the last line..enjoyed a lot cheers.
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:41:00 AM
Cute write...Sharing life..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/24/2010 2:47:00 AM
Oh so cute. I love this so clever.
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