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Hello Love

Hello Love, how are you doing today? Me? The same as yesterday. Although there remains sorrow, I reach for tomorrow. Hello Love, will you please pass my way? Oh Love, I met an old friend the other day. Like old times, I knew just what to say. Why were you not there? I believe you lack any care. Hello Love, will you please pass my way? Each time I call Love with you that I fall. A feeling so strong how can you be so wrong? I know it is a shame but Love you are to blame. How can Love be so blind? Sorry Love, I should never talk this way. It is not personal, I do hope you stay. Why must you go? You just got here, you know? So long Love, please come back to me someday. ............................................... Contest Entry: A Conversation Date Judged: 09/05/2016 Result: NA Contest 2: Take the Dagger from My Heart, Please 2 Sponsor: Broken Wings Result: 2nd Place ............................................

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Date: 10/16/2016 1:44:00 PM
Jesse congratulations on your win in my contest
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Date: 10/15/2016 12:58:00 AM
soo sweet and a winning cheers to you..huggs
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Date: 9/12/2016 7:28:00 AM
Not only blind, but soundless and oblivious at times! Love is everything. She will return. Hang in there. Great writing!
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Jesse Day
Date: 9/15/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/9/2016 4:12:00 PM
Love love this Jesse.
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Jesse Day
Date: 9/11/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Charmaine

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