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Hell Ride

Everyone has a dark side...shhhh but dnt tell anyone.... IM GOING TO TELL U ABOUT HELL ... ITS HELL RIDE.. Nw im alive...wit a vibe..to tell ma tribe tat i didnt gve bribe ,it was easy 2 get way frm hell whn its full wit people lyk us...they jus worship me lyk ä shrine..¥there's möre 2 TeLi I saw demons so smelly tat cn mke ur blood lyk jelly ,i had blood bath wit devils daughter..she really knw hw to do a MAN $LAUGHTER** P2**she loves hard rock n knws hw 2 roll n she also remember all partZ of the movie HOSTELthey gve me tour of hw they mke HELL so GREY.. They play wit stakes wit people on em ,in a çorner i saw hot oil in a pot n they took out lot of people n tag thm killer well it was a chillers..and so on,i ast wat was tat a demön kid sd its their daily bath¥¥ P3**AND laughed to mke me sure he was nt high..people were ripped apart day n night..they act lyk butcher in a way CHOP CHOP CHOP till the eyez pop out..they hve tons of eyes which they feed to their gargoyles,,the way the smack their mouth it looks tasty ..but where i was it looks nasty,whn they they put salt to make em tasty..¥¥ FINAL CHAPTER BEGINS P4 N whn my ride ends DEVIL made an offer 2 share his throne n free tomb 2 dig in..i said later frend i hve a BODY 2 LIve in,but i mde a promise tat whn ma body tarnish i will be here nxt mrng,he sd no one will touch ur soul other thn me..coz i will be there whn u die and i will bring YOU BACK HOME WITH ME...¥¥¥¥...EVERY END HAS A NEW BEGINNING....THERE AIN'T NO GRAVE CAN HOLD MY BODY DOWN...

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Date: 9/29/2015 4:41:00 AM
- Hey Shakti :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:43:00 PM
Hi Shakti, WOW,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shakti Rairishi
Date: 9/30/2015 8:49:00 AM
Hi skat nice to hear from you .. Sure will be happy to post more of my poem.. Smile back at ya ??
Date: 9/28/2015 12:22:00 PM
Shakti, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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