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Hell and High Water

The hand that reaches down to hell Gets scorched and the hand that Reaches up to heaven gets touched. Hell and high water hand in hand. Level lake disturbed by the swimmers Stroke; arm follows arm slicing the still Water. He daydreams as he glides Like an eel, glistening in the sunset. Hell is quenched by the water he has Touched.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 10:47:00 AM
liked it a whole lot.fire and smoke love and hope still get burned and make that u-turn
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Date: 7/9/2010 1:16:00 PM
Well David this could almost be a Grook .. why don't u enter it in the Grook contest.. its pretty awesome.. as always.. hope u are doing better.. my friend.. leaving in a few hours for our flight back home... so much to tell u on F.B. very soon.. of course ..advice will be needed as only u can give .. with luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 10:58:00 AM
Like the way you compare life to a "swim" between hell and high water. Very interesting and thought-provoking poem, David! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 8:53:00 AM
enjoyed reading today, deep thoughts
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Date: 7/8/2010 10:45:00 PM
very interesting how you ended this one up with the swimmer in the lake. I enjoyed this! LUv,Andrea
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Date: 7/8/2010 10:17:00 PM
Very nice write and interesting, David. Enjoyed the thought process. And thank you for your kind comments on my latest.
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