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Hell and Heaven Secrets of a Foreign Feild

A lush green tranquil field Hides it's secrets well Once a muddy blood stained land Were many young life Was sadly taken far from home In a living foreboding hell The rattling of the Huns machine gun The deafening pounding of falling shells Filled many young boy with dread and fear Who shed their anguished tears That burned from trembling heart. During the Malay of confusion Admit the dense chocking sulphurs smoke The ground quakes and shakes As the relentless fury of hell is unleashed UNFINISHED.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/25/2015 10:39:00 PM
Peter, so far you have penned a well written piece. I can't wait until its finished. P.S. welcome back my soup friend:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/6/2015 5:34:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. So good to hear from yiu, hope you are keeping ok. best wishes. Pete.

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