Hell

Chitinous wings envelop me. I can't breathe here, The air sears my lungs. I taste blood in the back of my throat. The pain is exquisite.

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Skat A

Date: 1/25/2016 7:45:00 PM

HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK THIS YEAR KIKI.....SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/15/2015 12:30:00 PM

Hi Kiki, this is such an excellent first piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2015 8:15:00 AM

Kiki, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 11/10/2015 5:55:00 AM

What a hellish, feeling...Kiki, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT