Hell

Flames to high and wide Heat hot it melts the human souls Only one can reign there Lucifer is in control of all souls He will win down there If only the flames could burn to ash Lucifer never stops his torture Tricia Bernard 9/22/14

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/24/2014 3:16:00 PM

Good luck on the contest with your poem about fire and brimstone.

Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/24/2014 6:42:00 PM

Thanks Brenda I hope it does ok .....Tricia

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2014 3:28:00 PM

very descriptive write Patricia:-) Hugs jan xxx

Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/23/2014 7:42:00 PM

Thanks Jan I try and sometimes he blesses me;).....Tricia

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/23/2014 1:26:00 PM

Tricia . . . A quite descriptive and very compelling Choka here. The tenor and pitch of your write is most excellent!! I really enjoyed it -- and your right, Lucifer never stops his torture. This one is a "7" in my book. Best Wishes, Gary

Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/23/2014 7:44:00 PM

Thank you so much I think god blessed me with this;) ....Tricia