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Held You Through

Your tears fell so slow.. I couldn't catch all of them.. So I just held you.. I gave you my ear.. It doesn't judge or cast words.. Just listens and hears.. My body and soul.. And a heart open for you.. Here for all your needs..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/7/2012 10:30:00 PM
.Nice.. to have you back Michael... this is a mighty you to give... I know the men i've been with only give me the them.. that $ucks...lol.. But, Nathan... gives me more than i expected... except his ear..lol.. Well Michael, this poem is very warm... thank you..pd
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:02:00 AM
Aww, cute poem!
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Date: 1/7/2012 5:31:00 PM
Sometimes that ability to just hold is all a person needs..Support in time of emotional or other distress..Great expressive work..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/7/2012 9:37:00 AM
I love the message in this Senryu series Michael, it's a wonderful read this fine Saturday Have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 1/1/2012 12:37:00 PM
Michael,beautifully written and so romantic. Anne.
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Date: 1/1/2012 9:57:00 AM
a very good senryu...this was another nostalgic poem abt love and u do care for the one...i can see from ur poems...reflects very much ....cheers !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/31/2011 4:45:00 PM
She is in Italy, isn't she?? Anyway, she could be back. Please let me know if you find anything out.
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Date: 12/31/2011 10:18:00 AM
So beautifully written. Have enjoyed reading your work, I think this will have to go inmy favs. Simple and Stunning. Em :)
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:56:00 PM
LOVELY...Kelli
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Date: 12/29/2011 8:43:00 PM
soo romantic indeed. good luck for the contest Michael, in romance you are supreme. Wishing you a Great Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/29/2011 5:36:00 AM
Awesome Michael, so profound, harry
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Date: 12/28/2011 1:32:00 PM
Aint love grand...and...this is a grand trio of Senryu. LOve, daver
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Date: 12/28/2011 8:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Michael. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:41:00 PM
very romantic,,great poem,,so real,,wonderful write............
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Date: 12/27/2011 8:35:00 PM
This one is full of your heart and soul, Michael. Sure the judge will love it!
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Date: 12/27/2011 6:26:00 PM
Beautifully done!
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:29:00 PM
So sweet Dawnie and romantic...thank you for the lovely comment x
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 12/27/2011 3:30:00 PM
sorry i ment sweet and romantic and thank you for the lovely comment ...x
Date: 12/27/2011 3:24:00 PM
A nice romantic trio of senryu entries. Good luck with them in the contest.
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