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After winter, springtime holds humans subject Also, likely sometimes control response to Nature's language, sedulous into summer Wildflowers blossom Written: April 18, 2015 /u /u /uu /u /u /u /u /uu /u /u /u /u /uu /u /u /uu /u

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/28/2015 8:53:00 AM

Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7

Eve Roper

Date: 4/19/2015 1:09:00 PM

Good job on this poem,Sara, good luck in the contest. 7 : ) Eve

Jack Horne

Date: 4/19/2015 5:01:00 AM

love the picture this one conjures up, my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2015 11:15:00 PM

this is nice, Sara. I am not sure on some of the meter but the imagery is wonderful.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2015 6:28:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Sara - I am thinking of doing this contest but the trochees and dactyls confuses me - and I have seen this done so many different ways doh:-( Hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest 7 xx