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Held In Suspense

The morning fog obscures, ironic in a sense, as water particles are likewise in suspense; muffling all sound, they coalesce in self-defense, uncertain of their fate when sunshine does commence. ————— An Awit: 12a:12a:12a:12a

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Date: 3/9/2023 6:04:00 PM
Ah Fog ! It obscures but hightens ones awareness of what is visible right before us. Like the poem...made me enter the space, felt the damp. Paul
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Date: 3/9/2023 12:34:00 PM
Ironic indeed! I do love it though when it forms a blanket on the mountain outside ny back door. It is so peaceful. Good one, Jeff.
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