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Heavy Emotion

What is this crippling pain I feel? It hurts so bad, but is it real? To feel better I would give anything, to be attractive a little joy would bring. I know I am stupid,ugly,and dull, all bad things weigh heavy on my soul. What did I do wrong is all I want to know, maybe if I knew I could climb out of this hole. It would be nice to be understood, to feel a warm embrace from loved ones would be good, Oh well no one will listen or understand, that a little love is all I demand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/12/2010 12:51:00 PM
Very nicely written ! It is very difficult to be optimistic when things appear against you , I've been there,but if you are rock bottom there's only UP to go ,take stock and lets motor!
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