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Heavens Tears

heaven's tears In hot desert sands frog's revive

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Thom Allen

Date: 3/18/2017 12:24:00 PM

Just a shout-out post to all Terry Lee's friends and followers: My Dear sister Terry Lee made 'the Transition' at the end of January 2017. In an effort to preserve her work; I am reviewing all her poems. As I scan through your comments, I discover aspects of Terry I had not been in touch with; and I appreciate your compassionate, kind words; gifts that have facilitated my own comfort. Consciousness is energy we all share which cannot be destroyed. Thanks to all of you. Thom Allen

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/20/2012 8:02:00 AM

Another pleasant stroll through Haikudom... ;-)) Terry

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/20/2012 9:03:00 PM

Thank you much Terry. Huggs TLee

Aditya Mathur

Date: 5/5/2012 2:45:00 AM

Nice, i really liked it.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/5/2012 4:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Aditya for your kind review. TLee

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/4/2012 8:10:00 PM

compleatly lost me

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/4/2012 8:23:00 PM

A breed of frogs bury themselves in the sand in the deserts for as much as 2 years waiting for rain. Then come out mate and as the water dries up they bury themselves again. I guess you don't watch the sience or discovery channel much Huggs TLee

Kash Poet

Date: 5/4/2012 7:51:00 PM

Nice haiku.Enjoyed.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/4/2012 8:29:00 PM

I'm glad to see you know about the desert frogs. Imagine waiting burried in the sand waiting for rain for up to 2 years. Thanks Kash for you praise. Huggs TLee

Joy Wellington

Date: 5/4/2012 7:16:00 PM

Hi Terry...when Heaven cries the desert sands will cool and frogs will peep out from their hiding place. Good command of the Haiku. Well done! Joy Wells

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/4/2012 7:26:00 PM

There are frogs that stay burried in the sand up to 2years waiting for the rain in (suspended animation I think is the term) and then come out and mate only to hybernate when the water dries up again. Thank you for your kind review Joy. Hugs TLee