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Heaven's Doorway

Not just what I expected but beyond Scenery so appealing there’s no word to describe this No such thing as uncomfortable or timid Only invitation, simplicity, liberation, amusement, the works! Each breath makes me feel brand new Each footstep encourages me to glide, skip and wiggle my toes even Sounds blended hitting the ear with confidence Perfection knows no sharps or flats Life’s weight lifted from these bodies revealing immaculately beautiful souls This land has no hierarchy, no worry, no schedule, no walls, no ceiling Just foundation That foundation is God It’s no wonder these souls can fly! And all of this I’ve seen as I make my way up the steps To Heaven’s Doorway

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/20/2012 9:58:00 PM
nice imagination and brilliant description .'' Heaven means to be one with God"(Confucius ).thank you for sharing .jk
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/21/2012 12:50:00 AM
Oh, WOW! Thanks for the info haha I'm glad Confucius and I agree on what Heaven is
Date: 6/6/2012 12:25:00 PM
amen. i wrote one just like this few years back..Glory! :)
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:17:00 PM
I felt I was there at one time,and your words are true.Discribed beautifuly!(Soup mail)
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Date: 6/4/2012 8:08:00 PM
I love how you ended it Brittany..nicely done..hugs...Joseph
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:39:00 AM
Lovely!! Excellent!! SuperB!! Lovely imagery!! This is a masterpiece... Keep it up Brittany! Love, Kbillion
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:19:00 PM
Ahhh...so sweet and tender!!! Loving the imagery here!! Excellent write!!! Keep burning!!
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:38:00 PM
Soup mail!!
Date: 6/2/2012 12:54:00 PM
Very pretty description of Heaven
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Date: 6/2/2012 11:56:00 AM
UTTERLY STUNNING POEM!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:48:00 AM
beautiful write indeed, Brittany
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Date: 6/2/2012 9:41:00 AM
Beautiful images in this gem.... love it....gald you smile at my Appetite Touched piece always nice to touch a new friend ...hugs Michael
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