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Heaven's Doorway

The most beautiful, the realm beyond imagination the end of your mortality, the judging of your soul. Today I stood in heaven's doorway to face God's verdict, I've never imagined, I'm still young, too young. I have so many dreams not yet fulfilled but there's a feeling, peace and comfort I can't resist I see happiness without end, love without envy, life without hatred, God eternity. I look back, my family, friends and enemies I saw I felt lonely and discontented without their forgiveness suddenly I hear voices.."One more step and be with us". Minutes and hours passed, I decided to take that step.. But.. then I woke..heard chattering, laughing, my siblings arrived, So glorious, it's going to be fun...Oh If I take that step I will be dead by now!

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Date: 5/28/2012 5:26:00 AM
Well written poem .I think it is for the contest.Best wishes.
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Charmane Bellen
Date: 5/28/2012 5:45:00 AM
Hi good day to you Kash..yeah I entered it to the contest..Thanks for reading it!Godspeed!>>charmane.

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