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Heavenly Music

Found God smoking weed in the back of my car, Didnt realize the joint would go so far, He loves to heal your open scars, The guys a legend, When he plays the guitar. Jesus rocks out to Iron Maiden, But belief in him fades, As we worship satan, To heaven or to hell, For wherever this life will lead, There'll always be people, Filled with pity and greed. A life blinded by hope, Held together by fear, Unworthy I sit here, Abandoned by peers. An endless story, Healed by God, A lifeless future, Im a pitiful sod. A taste of the past, A look at the future, It happened so fast, Was a call of nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/10/2009 7:12:00 AM
Your poetry has something of reality... but wished your first row as this: Found God guiding me to drive my care..... respecting the Lord. You regret being away from peers!! pls go to the library and create a future full of life so that you drag lifeless out of your depth. Wishing you all the best.
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:15:00 PM
Hi Vince, I wanted to take a moment to welcome you to Poetry Soup and to let you know that you will meet many wonderful people here through words. I enjoyed reading your poem, today. It's a WOW! I'm gong to put it in my favorites- Keep writing. Sincerely, DAS-J
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