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Heavenly Colours

Just awake curtains drawn, I view a scene beyond the glass The colours that befall my eyes are nothing more than class There are greys and blues with purple twists like a carpet in the sky With orangy reds not a shade was missed as I looked on in awe and sighed A window of light appeared, as if peeking through the clouds As his colours started speaking to me, as they spoke silently out loud This vista that you see beyond the glass on this sunny morn Will radiate and fill your eyes as if they were newly born I say to myself how lucky I am that God painted me a sky today As the morning grows and the colours fade, I marvelled at his display God painted me a sky (today)...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/18/2010 8:03:00 AM
My Friend! Nice 3rd Place Finish- your an amazing writer. Keep pushing that pen! Later, Jimmy
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:17:00 PM
James, absolutely breathtaking use of my favorite form Loved this poem, congratulations on your placement is the contest, YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations James. A beautiful morning sky well described. good work...Margaret
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Date: 6/1/2010 2:45:00 PM
excellent work. I have not written in a while as I am in school however reading this has given me a new hope to bring pen to paper again... beautiful and uplifting work.
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Whats My Theme Contest for Constance with this dynamic write on your theme to victory.. enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:24:00 PM
Such is the beauty of the shore line where I am vacationing James and this is a visual of perfection .. enjoyed a masterful creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:42:00 PM
so good! and lucky you to precieve it and be looking and value it...happiness is there ;) Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:56:00 PM
You've painted a beautiful picture with your poetry. Fantastic write.
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:55:00 AM
What a visual masterpiece.. thoroughly enjoyed it! - Wilma
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