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Heaven Wanted You More

No more pain for you as you're lain to rest in heaven. No worries, though you'll always be on my mind as I'm walking in the rain. I'll still be waving in the wind at you from the docking of the boat we sailed in one moonlit night way up high. Oh what a sight of a crystal beeded lake. We had no clue we were so close to heaven, That we were going to get in each others arms at that moment without a care of your brothers. Nor we did not care to share that moment with a single soul,But we knew we had to tear ourselves away so we could mingle like the rest for we know that would be rude but if we only knew that Heaven wanted you more, We would have never torn our gaze off of our moment

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Date: 4/8/2009 7:43:00 PM
Heaven is our hope and it should be our final destiny. It is attainable by the Grace of God.........We need to be good... Love God and Love our neighbors as much as God loves us. I have some poems in www.poetry.com .... look for/type Jose ( first name ) and Stephen ( last name) in the searchbox for artists. .
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:29:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. I think anyone who has lost someone special in their lives will relate to this poem. Insightful piece. Thank you for taking time to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:28:00 AM
So sad for you both but I envy the strength of your underlying, undying, hope shown throughout this write. Well expressed, have a great Easter and thanks for the welcome reads/comments!
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:04:00 PM
....the good part is "Your Priceless Souls" belief and knowing, that someday You shall Both meet again!!!:):)~Smile~And it has seemed very apparently clear unto myself through "Your Wonderful Writes" thus far~that You have "No Doubt" within this wonderful "Truth!!!":):)~"Beautifully Soulful Poem Dear Cheryl!!!":):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Yours,' Forever, John!!!:):)
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:59:00 PM
Heart-Wrenching Bittersweet Thought Dear Gifted & Lovely Cheryl!!!::):)~Hello My Poetic Friend:):) Been away for a bit on vacation! So I'm trying to do a little catching up right now!? The sadness of this write, is the loss of "Your Precious Hearts Love!!!":):)....cont....
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