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Oh, how I come alive in pleasured zone when passion sears my flesh, flays to bone Euphoria soars then bursts in rainbowed hue the universe is made of me and you your fingers scorch me in their blazing flame You set each longing free: unchaste, untame to dominate, you tie my every dream then give and get your pleasure in extreme we're bonded in the essence of desire no other thought but how to quench the fire Surrender brings release from frenzied pace I see the glow of love here on your face They say that heaven waits for those who love When I'm with you I'm taken up above Eileen Manassian

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Robert Lindley

Date: 1/1/2017 10:02:00 AM

MY FRIEND,NOBODY DOES HOT, HOT ROMANCE AS DO YOU! This one is sizzling and an image feast inspiring one, to give cause to us to remember our own such encounters(if we have been so wildly blessed!)... ADDED TO MY FAV LIST...

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/14/2016 8:47:00 AM

It's electrifying... Hot, passion, romance and mesmerizingly beautiful!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2016 8:55:00 PM

Thank you, dear. Very kind of you to visit. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/13/2016 3:23:00 PM

Feel free to drop by, there are a three or four you might like. I am well, busy but in a good way.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2016 8:56:00 PM

I'm glad your busy in a good way...Hugs, dear.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/12/2016 8:27:00 AM

Ooh la la hot! I think after reading this one all the snow has melted off the roof of my house.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/12/2016 12:59:00 PM

:) Need to come up with another one to melt the snow on the driveway! ;) What a sweet comment, Richard. How have you been? I've missed you....

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/11/2016 2:36:00 AM

Beautiful romance in this sonnet. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/12/2016 1:13:00 PM

Thank you, Ravi. You are always kind with your comments.

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/9/2016 8:37:00 AM

Intensely romantic, Eilene. Very HOT!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2016 8:56:00 PM

The hotter, the better! :) Thanks, Daniel.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2016 4:54:00 AM

- Romantic and beautiful ... 7 - a gem, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2016 8:59:00 PM

Love you, sweetie. Thank you for visiting my work. Hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/8/2016 9:11:00 PM

Only someone with supreme passion understands the world you've painted, its a gift and a curse not everyone has, but those that do find the world is alive in ways only a poem like this can discribe

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2016 9:04:00 PM

A gift and a curse it certainly is, Frederic. You certainly know this well. Thank you for this lovely response to my poem.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/8/2016 8:41:00 PM

WoW! Eileen, this is sooo romantic. It was oozing with passion and desire as well. You are so good at these kind of writes. "Queen Of Passion suits you well. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2016 9:09:00 PM

A double seven!!! I'm so honored, dear. Wow. Thank you for finding this to your liking....Hugs

White Wolf

Date: 12/8/2016 6:40:00 PM

Such romance in this sonnet, Eileen! Beautifully done

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2016 7:22:00 PM

Thanks, Rick. Passion and Romance give my life....

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/8/2016 6:37:00 PM

Wow! I was taken up above, too!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2016 7:22:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Sunlite. Words can never do passion justice...it just burns. :) Thanks for the visit.