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Heaven Waits

How can I reach it I just want to walk across The bridge to heaven for familiarity unknown contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 10:01:00 PM

very nice, Faleshia. How did I ever miss all these poems of yours? I have noticed a few of the longer ones I had already commented to!

Swairik Das

Date: 5/1/2010 6:15:00 AM

expectations are always awaited. Good one.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/18/2010 6:46:00 AM

Nicely written Senryu, Andrea! Enjoyed reading it. Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Love, Gert

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/16/2010 9:19:00 AM

Excellent, Faleshia! A definite winner...Thanks for reading and posting your usual, kind comment for me....I wish you good luck in the contest, anyway, even though I doubt that you'll be needing it! Peace, Audrey

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2010 11:43:00 AM

Nice one! enjoyed, P.D. was here

Date: 4/13/2010 8:46:00 PM

What an uplifting poem. I want to get on that "bridge to heaven." Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2010 12:32:00 PM

I like your approach here. Very unique! Best of luck in the contest. LUv, andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2010 3:34:00 AM

Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Mitch White

Date: 4/12/2010 11:45:00 PM

nice bridge Faleshia- good luck to you

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/12/2010 8:47:00 PM

Very explicit images. Good luck in the contest

Rick Parise

Date: 4/12/2010 7:18:00 PM

Good luck!! The bridge to heaven, so nice- Check mine if you'd like "Infinite" You did reach it !!!!!!!!!! I love this piece Thanks, Rick~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Salem , or

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2010 7:00:00 PM

Excellent Faleshia and good luck in Gareth's contest... his photo was exciting to write a poem for and wish u much success..luv.. Linda-Marie

John Freeman

Date: 4/12/2010 6:48:00 PM

Yes, me too Faleshia. Good luck in contest. Agape, Moses