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Heaven Sent

I'm standing on the platform, but I ain't waiting for a train It's a spaceship I'm about to enter to take me to another plane I'm going on a journey and I'll be gone for many a year But the sights I view will marvel I, and quell all my fears The countdown has reached it's prime as the boosters ignite the fuel Blast off as I head to the heavens, escaping the atmosphere's cool The tanks that have carried me here, are released to fall to the earth There's no turning back I say to myself, this is a time to feel worth The first thing I do when we orbit, is to view where I came from Whatever I find, where ever I go, there will only be one place called home Into the black void we travel, passing abandoned pieces of man Redundantly left to roam, they have finished their part of his plan We pass many particles of matter, forever strewn in this darkened world Remnants of explosions from it's past, in ever travelling hurl Bright lights appear all around, these plasma luminous balls Held together by gravity, growing up they left us in enthralled As we travel we become very wary, of the monster from this deep Black Holes we are told many a time, from them nothing seeps These regions of space lure, not even light can escape Anything bright in it's presence, becomes inter planetary rape But out in this uncharted territory lies a beautiful wonderful place It's called the Milky Way Galaxy, it's where our Solar System is graced If man ever decides to frequent, we have to leave many traits behind For if there are others out here, we really have to be A totally different, mankind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/1/2010 5:17:00 AM
Smile ... loved this one James ... enjoyed the read love Jayne x x
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Date: 9/30/2010 2:18:00 PM
James, my cats were so lazy they would just sit and watch mice play! Thanks for reading my work today, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/30/2010 10:36:00 AM
interesting piece, an enjoyable read today. Cindy
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:17:00 AM
Yes, commander, hope I get to thank you before you land or dock; you read and comment on my poem, exalting my humble stock, so on your return from space, O poet of extraodinary good imagination and taste, please drop by an old friend, and lets mix metaphors again
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Date: 9/28/2010 12:02:00 PM
Great write...Have a wonderful trip or maybe will you move and take up residence there?.Sara
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Date: 9/28/2010 7:16:00 AM
I just love you title for this one, an exceptional write, you have taken me on a journey with this one James.. Hope your week is a splendid one :) Wilma
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Date: 9/27/2010 10:39:00 PM
James, I really like "inter planetary rape", the way you used it. BTW soup mail. Charles
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:30:00 PM
Another exceptional piece of work, Highlander! Another for the winners' circle that's for sure, my friend..Definitely goes to my favs. today. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:43:00 PM
Per your comment, what we really need to do is get rid of all political parties that are funded by special interests. Let everyone run as an independent and succeed or fail on their own merits. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:27:00 PM
Mankind has a long way to go before we're prepared to commune with creatures of higher intelligence. I do believe they travel through Earth's skies wondering why our growth has been stunted. Hope you enter this in Barbara's contest! She'll love it too. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 1:52:00 PM
It's a chilling thought that man would not be welcome in other worlds, James. With our greed and ignorance, though, you are probably right. Other species are bound to be more evolved. Good luck in Barbara's contest and congrats again on your top place in the Sphinx Head on Mars contest. This is a great genre for you. Diane
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Date: 9/26/2010 1:04:00 PM
Nice James, your poetry is far and beyond today. Very different, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:41:00 AM
love it, good luck in the contest with this wonderful entry
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:39:00 AM
Wow! I love it, such a story teller! hows you my friend? and thank you for your lovely comments! love Simone
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