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Heaven Reaching Down

Heaven Reaching Down Silence Moment of gold Holy majestic kiss Heaven reaching down to save man Rapture 06-05-2015 A Modern Cinquain poem written for Sara's Cinquain contest.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2015 3:31:00 PM

Robert, I like your spiritual approach to the contest..Thanks for your participation..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 11:54:00 PM

wow, this is a well crafted one here. Congrats on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/11/2015 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Robert, hugs dear friend Eve

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 3:49:00 PM

Robert, Congratulations........ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2015 2:00:00 PM

Robert, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2015 10:02:00 AM

a beautiful cinquain many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/10/2015 9:37:00 PM

A beautiful picture, Robert! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/9/2015 5:15:00 AM

Robert, I like your Cinquain write here very much. An instant "7" Sir!! I'm planning to do some of these too as I continue experimenting with different formats. I've got multiple competing priorities on the various themes I'm working on. (Nearing completion of my first draft short story for my second planned book. I intend to write a number of shorts stories for my second book to include one from Ingrid, my wife.) And so, have mercy on me when you see my first Cinquain write! Best!! Gary

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/11/2015 2:23:00 PM

Thanks Robert, Again a most brilliant job here!! Apparently you won the contest. Congratulations!! -- I'm not at all surprised. I plan to do some Cinquain writes. The second book, BTW, is at least a two-year effort. And so, I have time. But with Short Stories too, the work load is greater. I might sponsor a contest in the future. (But I need to find the time . . . HA HA!!) Keep Writing My Good Friend . . . Best Always, Gary

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/10/2015 8:33:00 PM

Thanks Gary. I know how busy you must be with the second book . God bless..