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Heaven is crying

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Heaven is crying

Crystals of reflection shatter on earth’s countenance,
for Heaven is crying,
drenching the misty shroud consecrating her face 
in sobbing percussion.
Liquid satin rolls down withered skin
and sensations are set alight
in the dance of icy fire.
With the tingling aroma of melancholy,
all time ceases to exist during hypnotic rhythms 
consoling a heart without beat.
In a trance, I taste Heaven’s decadent sorrow
mingling with the salt of my own tears…

(Written 25/05/2013)

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 10:43:00 AM
    This is a profoundly moving poem. It makes you wonder if grandparents and parents who have passed on still cry when we hurt, just like they did before

    Thomas Avatar Robyn Thomas
    Date: 5/26/2013 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! Yes, one has to wonderzn especially when it's raining :)
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 8:13:00 AM
    hi Robyn, love the symbolism here and great imagery! nice written---have a good day!, Elai

    Thomas Avatar Robyn Thomas
    Date: 5/26/2013 11:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanx Elai! :)