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Heaven In Hell

All people that on Earth do Dwell if you have sex you'll go to Hell unless of course you share a ring then God will let you do your thing. But you of course must play the game that hypocrites shout in his name; the rules are clear you must not stray, don't question God, it's just that way! But who interprets God's true word the story really is absurd, his rules of course were set in stone by Moses looking for a home. But even he thought they were crap, his temper led to that mishap when even stone was forced to break, the rewrite.... just a second take? In name of God, from broken stone, we must not stray from those at home or you will find without a doubt that from your home you'll be thrown out. But was it not another deed forbid by God let Eve conceive? For only when he cast both out did birth of Mankind come about. All people that on Earth do Dwell if we have sex we'll go to Hell. But when we're in that deepest pit, as long as everyone can fit, I'm sure we all will have some fun where with our friends we're joined as one and maybe when down there we dwell we'll share the Devil's wife as well! Ivor G Davies

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Date: 4/27/2015 11:45:00 AM
Ivor - A very brave poem. I wrote a similar one you might like: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/progressive_christianity_666890
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Date: 5/2/2015 6:11:00 PM
Read you link and enjoyed the content. I find that having a fair knowledge of the bible helps one to put things in to perspective and gives excellent fodder for poetry! Although I used to post a lot on lit.org it is easier to see my work on my own site www.rhymingpoet.co.uk Although this is a personal site and not for other poets to post on..... Ivor

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