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Heaven and Hell 1

Heaven and Hell

Alone and poverty-stricken, she turned a prostitute
There lived close by an old sage on a Heaven-bound quest
Whose mind never forgave the sins of this destitute
But her mind always dwelt on GOD  with the sole request
To save her from  Hell and to give in HIM her final rest.

Both of them ,in time, died ; to Heaven went the woman
And the sage went to Hell, to the surprise of the two
‘How could this be?’,  sage asked ,to get the reply that did stun
‘ True it’s that she sinned, but kept her mind pure and to God glued
For letting your mind  dwell on her sins, you got your due’

29th Jul 12
For Kim Morrison's contest

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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:46:00 PM
    I loved the ending to this one in particular. Congrats Kim!

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:48:00 AM
    A brilliant and absolutely captivating piece of writting.

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 8:15:00 AM
    WOW! Powerful message S. True, we're not so wise as to criticize. Nice job. Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 4:55:00 AM
    Hi Jag congrats on your win inthe comp, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 4:09:00 AM
    Another standing ovation! I like PD's words--thanks for the double journey! She is right...great write on the spiritual matters of man! gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:47:00 PM
    well done Jag. Congratulations. Thanks for your welcome back. Its been a rough year, glad to be back. take care Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:20:00 PM
    Jag, congrats on your win, you are on a roll...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:26:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful win Jag

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:30:00 PM
    JAG..HI ONCE AGAIN...:-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:45:00 AM
    You always write your best poetry for these contests of PD...I really think she will love this one, jag...the message to me is "judge not, lest you be judged!" So wonderful in its message and especially on our Sabbath today...Sent a Get Better Message to you...I do hope you feel better soon, friend! Rest up!....Again, this is such a powerful poem! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 4:41:00 AM
    Very well written, no one has free ticket to heaven. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 4:04:00 AM
    Very philosophical write and such is the justice of God. Great write here.