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Heaven is a world above the stars without hate and without wars. There is no fear for God is King way up here. No poverty or crying, or sick people dying, No merchants of sin, only love within. No children without mothers, fathers, sisters and brothers. No friendless or homeless, Everyone really loves each other. No punishment is needed for there is no crime, and all of us have plenty of time. Time for love and time for laughter, And life is fun in the Everafter. There are no fights way up there. Singing and joy fill the air. There are flowers and trees and deep blue seas. And in the grass the children play. There are mountains and clouds and the sweet smell of hay. The birds still sing and the angels hover above our heads around each other. The animals are tame and people the same, And contentment will be the love God gives to you and to me. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: Oct. 27, 2001 "All Rights Reserved"

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Date: 9/19/2018 3:52:00 AM
Carole, your poem is wonderful and it is so refreshing to see a lady who is not ashamed of the Gospel of Christ.
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/19/2018 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, Curtis. I'm glad you liked "Heaven". Carole
Date: 9/19/2018 3:19:00 AM
Ahh, such a calm place heaven look like, I wonder that when I will finally be able to enter it, atleast there will be a eternal peace, anyways I absolutely love reading your description of heaven, your poem was beautiful and certainly a joy to read, many congratulations on your wonderful position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/19/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Faraz. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem so much. Carole
Date: 9/17/2018 7:29:00 AM
Congrats, Carol. I enjoyed reading this. You described so well the place called heaven.
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/17/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Curtis. Carole :D
Date: 9/16/2018 7:42:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of heaven, Carole, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/17/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Carole :D
Date: 9/16/2018 1:40:00 PM
Lovely, Carole. Congrats on your win.
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/17/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thanks, Line. Carole :D
Date: 1/8/2018 2:08:00 AM
I just read your bio and so came here to read your favourite poem... This is just amazing... Loved it... Such a pleasant write... Thanks for sharing...
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/17/2018 5:48:00 PM
Well, thank you so much for your interest and for your comment on "Heaven", Supraja.
Date: 12/5/2017 4:18:00 PM
Carole, I just read your Bio, which I thoroughly enjoyed, and it directed me to your favorite poem that you had written. I really enjoyed reading this and it gave me such a peaceful feeling this afternoon. Who knows what heaven will be like, but I really like your vison. Thank you for sharing it. John
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/7/2017 10:11:00 AM
Hi John!...and thank you so much for your lovely comment on "Heaven". I'm so glad you liked it. :D Carole
Date: 6/11/2017 10:05:00 AM
Your vision of what Heaven will look like, has given your soul wings and let your spirit soar to the heavens on a cloud of joy. Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your message is clear and sweet to both heart and soul. Love's presence in your reality has given you the source for your inner peace and the its strength provides you with hope. Emile.
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/11/2017 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Emile. Yes, "faith, hope and charity (love)" is the way. Carole
Date: 3/1/2017 11:50:00 AM
It is my belief for those who are lucky enough to get to Heaven, it will not be a time of leisure. i believe those righteous few will still spend their time worshiping and praising God. Yes it will be paradise but eternity will not be wasted. It will be spent praising God with no memory of life on earth. This is MY belief. A beautiful poem, Carole:)
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Date: 3/1/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Danny. And, I believe that we will have a new life on a new planet and a chance to be and do the things we've always dreamed of. I have always wanted to be a great pianist...lol. And, I hope we'll be able to see our loved ones again. Perhaps that is what real reincarnation is...instead of coming back to a polluted earth. Who knows?
Date: 2/23/2017 2:01:00 PM
Just how I imagine it will be. Beautiful. #7
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/23/2017 8:18:00 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth. This poem is my answer to John Lennon's, "Imagine". So glad you liked it.
Date: 12/17/2016 10:12:00 PM
And contentment will be! I feel like I'm having deja vu! Haha! A lovely poem, Carole, glad I read it once again!
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/18/2016 1:55:00 AM
Thank you, Budgie. lol I forgot you had already read it.
Date: 9/28/2016 6:21:00 AM
After reading your bio I had to V-line straight to heaven of course. Haha Hope you get to publish your book, you deserve it and more, and thanks for a heavenly poem /|\
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/28/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Rick. I am so glad you liked it and thank you so much for your good wishes. :-)
Date: 9/12/2016 1:05:00 AM
simply beautiful!!! :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/12/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur. I'm glad you liked it...and I'm sure that after we die our spirits will live on somehow, somewhere , someday.
Date: 8/23/2016 1:12:00 PM
- I enjoy this one, beautifully poem Carole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/18/2016 1:56:00 AM
Thank you for your nice comment, Anne. Sorry I didn't respond sooner. Didn't see your comment before now.
Date: 8/16/2016 1:25:00 PM
The human optimum, why can we not have some of that down here where the mindless ravages of men and wars take place, Nice writes Carole
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/18/2016 2:00:00 AM
Because of GREED, Edward, combined with the lack of LOVE for one's neighbor. Thanks for reading and for your comment. Sorry this is so belated but I only just saw your comment. Carole
Date: 8/3/2016 9:52:00 AM
Beautiful word-picture of what heaven will be like; something to look forward to after living here on earth. Lovely poem, Carole, Hugs
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/18/2016 2:01:00 AM
Thank you, Rebecca. I only just saw your comment or I would have responded sooner. Carole
Date: 8/1/2016 5:24:00 AM
Wonderful imagination ...
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/18/2016 2:03:00 AM
Thanks, Probir. I would have responded sooner but I only just saw your comment. Carole

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