Heaven

When we depart this earthly realm For all eternity to sleep Will heaven's angels at the helm Awaken us from slumbers deep Where death once held us in its keep And guide us towards heaven's light Where we will sing with great delight In heaven's realm in skies above To reunite with hearts so bright And join hands with those we love

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:40:00 AM

Joseph~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/6/2015 5:20:00 AM

truly beautiful excellent pen joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2015 2:17:00 PM

glad to see this one made the list, Congrats, Joseph. Did you get the problem with ads straightened out here now??

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/3/2015 7:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win Joseph. God bless))rajat

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2015 6:40:00 AM

Great inspirational write many congrats Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/3/2015 5:28:00 AM

Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2015 1:55:00 PM

As you can see, I was finally able to see your poem, Today I am not having the problem so much!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2015 1:54:00 PM

that is how many envision it. I sure hope they are right!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 11:47:00 PM

Joseph, this is beautiful, and I love that you stepped out of the 10 syllable-lined form and did eight. Well done...hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2015 3:59:00 PM

JOseph, sorry I can't see a new poem to comment on . I am fit to be tied right now fighting the popups. I tried going to fire fox, and now the same thing is happening on the other server. OH MY

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/28/2015 3:28:00 AM

Great write Joseph. Enjoyed it.Love>rajat