Heaven

Sweet dancing jasmine Scent upon air Breathing in beautiful In sweet aroma I catch a star In a gentle whisper I leave it Under the pillow Hoping within A wish Trailing in thoughts On a dark lonely night It will shine Outwardly to you Embracing emotions In deep dripping feelings On a blood moon Playing love's tune Crying in the chapel Floating river Of scarlet passion Dreaming in the clouds Destiny calls A princess From grains of love Building from the sands A castle within One staircase In the right Direction The world Becomes beautiful Wrapped around Only you

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Allan Koven

Date: 9/18/2013 9:31:00 AM

Romance enthralls and delights. We seldom hear such beautiful emotions expressed by men. Well done!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 4:32:00 PM

thank you deeply for the very beautiful comment

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2013 9:12:00 AM

The world becomes beautiful wrapped around only you-I so love this verse you penned..And i love the star you send within a wish on dark and lonely nights..So much comfort in such words.You dazzle my soul with beauty.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 3:02:00 PM

YOUR SOUL IS ALREADY VERY BEAUTIFUL LIKE SUNSHINE IT SMILES OUT IN TENDER WARMNESS WITHOUT A SHADOW YOU ARE MY FAVORITE THANK YOU DEARLY HEARTFELT

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/18/2013 9:13:00 AM

And its time to add the poet to my favs : )

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/17/2013 12:23:00 PM

Beautiful.....beautiful as always, Liam

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/17/2013 2:48:00 PM

AS IS YOUR AMAZING COMMENT EILEEN I THANK YOU DEEPLY GREATLY APPRECIATED