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Heaven

would taste like your lips nirvana, the way I feel when I am with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/7/2012 2:29:00 PM
JB.... wow...what a cross over...sweet..pd
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:14:00 AM
Heaven nicely captured in these lines.Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/21/2011 5:55:00 AM
someone has some sweet lips..nice write JB..TAH
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Date: 2/21/2011 5:39:00 AM
Wow, this is one awesomr poem. You have beautifully managed to put all the emotions in this. Love it.
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Date: 2/21/2011 5:31:00 AM
Nice novel definition of nirvana, B.J.
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